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Something tells me we'll get Elder Ring porn as the next update judging on how much the creator is playing it

To be honest? I love the demo. Absolutely cute and nice back and forth with also a good idea behind the project!

First of all I want to excuse myself for the rudeness regarding my previous post, but I still feel like the demo has nothing in it.

This is the first work I've see you make since it's the first time I stumble into one of your games, so I can't judge you from what you've done before but only on what I can see, so let me analyze it from my point of view.
The current Public Build "ASFK--Public Demo" has one Index w/text, 2 following texts, a dropdown menu, a text and an ending page with your info.
No images, no real text that is longer than two sentences and no way of understeanding or seeing what you're trying to promote.
What is it supposed to be in the long run? A slideshow with images and descriptions? A text-based story? A mix of the two? A choice-based game?
I have no clue what you're going for,  what you have in your plans and what I'm supposed to get if I supported you on Patreon.
Take this point of view with a pitch of salt since others that know you as an artist/storywriter/anything might already know what you're onto, but from the current demo and what I've seen, all that it's present is, like I said, just a few lines and a dropdown menu.

How am I supposed to know what is it going to be?

So..the current demo is literally an HTML code with barely any CSS...for what?
What is this demo supposed to show? That you can connect pages and make a black version of w3school's dropdown menu? No images, barely any writing, weird color choice (white words on bright color?) and nothing else to show.
A plain 180-lines code that does and shows absolutely nothing.

If you did more stuff in the Patreon version I highly suggest to implement something (maybe make only one finished choice avaiable or show all the choices partially to make the players see what they're missing out) because this current demo code screams emptyness and lazyness while keeping the interest away.

Public mods' common link when? I bet artists will get crazy with the edits as more time passes, so I'm quite sure a small database to hold the modding accessible would be a good idea.

this mad fishy lmao

I believe you should add a wall to avoid people just moving on the left and bugging the whole game out, but apart from that holy shit if it's a good work! Keep it up!